6th Post

The overall shape of this one is good its just the colours that I don't really like.They just don't go well together and there is too many colours in this image. I have nothing against multiple colour ponies its just when it gets too much it doesn't look right.

5th Post

You may need glasses or just not view this image.

I just don't know what's going on, but I will try to explain:

The mane is black and red in a wavy pattern.

They have 14 horns but I don't know is some are some sort of a crown.

Their body is black and covered in neon markings.

Their front left leg are rainbow colours.

On the front of their neck there is a tattoo of a heart with 'Desu' written inside

Their chest is a dragon belly with the separate layers.

Their wings are rainbow and have more patterns on.

Finally their tail is a dragon tail with rainbow hair coming off of it.

Overall I think there is just too much going on they could make it into a good OC if the kept a few of the things you can see in it

4th Post

I just don't know.Firstly it looks like a recolour of Luna with the body type and the cutie mark outside.Secondly I don't really like how the main body is black and then the mane is rainbows I don't know what's going on with the legs the front two are kind of stripy and the hind legs are spotty.Lastly: leg warmers, it would have been fine but the character mane is very bright and warm but leg warmers are a sign of it being cold.Overall this character has a lot of room for improvement the art is a good style and it looks they would be able to draw their own art.

3rd Post

There are two things I don't like on this design and character.Firstly it looks like a Mary Sue character as it is a princess and her name.Sexondly the colour scheme is just a bad choise as she is pink with rainbow wings and it looks like she's dirty, like really dirty.You can see how this could be a good character if they creator made a backstory and changed the name to something less bold.

2nd Post

The design has nothing wrong with it its just the colours.The bright neon colours clash with the plain purple and white. I don't know if it is just an alicorn zebra or a regular aliorn with unusual markings.

Post one

This is a bad OC because it is just a recolour of a canon character for the TV show, Luna. It could be a good OC if they didn't just change the colour on a main pony they could have used a base if they were unsure on how to draw a alicorn pony.

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Hello, it is I Nightstrawberry this is my first blog and I will be posting and review I PERSONALLY think are bad. If you are against my choises then please don't argue with me it's my opinion.